Disclaimer:
This poem is for my book that I am working on (all fiction don’t worry!)
Pieces of the Circle
True love can’t be forgotten
though years have hid it’s flame~
Lost love held inside of me
without shelter or a name
Finding me in my despair,
weary from the pain
so ready for young love
to be restored for me again
We hesitated in mid air
like a note sung by a singer~
The scent of love we used to know
somehow made us stop and linger~
Did we understand the cost
of choosing to stay or close the door?
Did we deserve to take our turn
and even ask for more?
The love inside of me grew until
I thought that I would burst
I feared that what I held dear,
by my loved ones would be cursed
The past has met the present
like waves upon the sand~
The foundation was never ready
for us to step on or to stand
We were caught inside a love story
with all the tragedy and pain
No one would ever accept our love
or allow it to remain,
like Romeo and Juliet,
like Elizabeth and Browning.
Our love was like a soaring sea
as we struggled to keep from drowning.
God became our rescuer,
The One who calms the seas.
The One who knows all of our tomorrows,
and what they all will be.
And so we rest in HIM
and put us in His care
And when we I look for true love…
I know I’ll find Him there.
Diane Reed
2013
*Note* This poem is stored here for future use in my book. (Previous chapters can be found here in this blog.*)
Really beautiful!
Thank you!
Gorgeous and vivid words!! Love it!!!
Thanks Patricia!
🙂
xoxo
Happy Mother’s Day!
what? no follow button? am I blind? I would like to follw. . .can you lead me tot he right place?
Oh you are so sweet! From where I sit, the follow button is in the black bar above the Title: The one Thing I know….
Thank you for wanting to follow!
got it. duh. Thanks for following my scribblings
My pleasure!
Truly beautiful pain …. *smile – you’re so talent – just write .. and write and write and write.
Ahhh Viv,
You are soooo sweet! What a nice thing to say!
This is simply beautiful Diane! You emotions are so easily conveyed when I read your writing! You go girl!
Thanks Debby!
Your words mean a lot!!!!
Diane, whether fact or fiction, every time I read your poetry I feel the emotion, sense the longing as you unleash such heartfelt desires. 🙂
Yeah you are sharper than ya know! Most of my stuff is from experience. The book I am writing is therapy that allows me to go back into my past and re-live some of the feelings… finding pieces of me to hopefully make a whole person when it is completed! 😉
My characters are fictional based on a lot of real experiences! Sometimes I feel as if like this poem… I am still there… climbing my way out.. The problem is… I have to mention a disclaimer from time to time so people don’t think I am actually going through it now! Ya know?
Anyway, as alway you are the BEST inspire-er!!!!
Thank you!!!
xoxo