I step over the line
And then I look back
as the fragrance of the moment lasts
I hold today loosely
as it slips through the cracks
and I fall into step
with this dance
Like a feather falling
I hear your soul calling
as it brushes my heart
and then lingers
Like hugging sand
when the hour glass breaks
Just time
running through our fingers….
Diane Reed 2013
In trying to clean out mega email, I came across this posting. When I accessed I remembered reading the poem and noticed I had Liked but did not leave a comment. This is really a wonderful poem, Diane, with a very clear message. The pictures you chose are absolutely the perfect enhancement!
I began going through some of the comments that I missed and this one was a treasure! Thank you!
xoxo
Beautiful…
Time stands still when I’m with you
Ahhh thanks babe… I feel the same!
XOXO
Oh, I really loved this one!
Thank you! I am not sure why but I am stuck on poetry right now!
This was a perfect read on a Friday afternoon.Time seemed to vanish this week, so I love this reminder to savor.
Thank you for reading! As always I am blessed!~
XOXO
I love the image of sand running through our hands. It reminds me to take a moment to pause for all the blessings in my life. Time is like a thief otherwise. Beautiful poem, Diane!
Anka I am so lucky that I have you guys who always faithfully take your “time” and support me! Glad you liked it!
XOXO
Di
Diane, you know how to use your hear, soul and the world … this is so beautiful and your images are so beautiful too. I’m not a poem girl, but I love the beauty you bring.
Viv,
I always love how you take your time to share your thoughts after I post something! I am so blessed to have such loyal supporters such as you!
XOXO
Di
Hermoso escrito que se acompaña muy bien con las imágenes.
Que tu fin de semana sea mágico.
Un abrazo.
🙂
This is beautiful Diane. Soft, mesmerizing, it draws me deep into that place of release.
We both chose ‘a line’ to write about in our poems today — how lovely!
Louise! You are right! Your post is beautiful! Everyone should go take the time to read it!!!
Nothing gives us a feeling of time fleeting like sand in a hourglass …
That is what I tried to convey and you said it beautifully! As always, a master of words! 😉
Got to give you a great big WOW on this one! Absolutely beautiful write, with a wonderful message! I love it!
Thank you so much Chales… as always a huge compliment coming from YOU!
Oh, how beautiful. I love your combination of words with pictures. They perfectly match! Welldone! 🙂
Thank you! Everyone needs to visit your blog today! I spent most of my morning there!!! Sooo amazing!
I love they way you intersperse pictures that relate to that portion of the poem. It;s lovely!
Thank you Keli!